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The Things I See When I Look

So,
I think a bit differently
Then everyone else in this world.
When my thoughts are swirling around,
Some people start to hurl.

You know,
It’s not exactly my fault.
What I think is fine
Is just wrong.
What some people consider
Incredibly gross,
I’ll just put it
In a song.

This and that looks like her breast,
All the rest looks like sex.
Horizontally,
He’s on top of her huffing,
That’s all that I see.
The rest of the world sees what it really is.

My mind works in these ways
Because it’s what I want to see.
Something I can joke about,
Do what I want, as I please.
You know what, I'll say this at least:
I’m sorry for being such a porno creep.

Author notes

The title was all I could think of because, well, it is sort of true.
I see things in a wrong sort of way, and I've done it for all of my life. So, I'm pretty used to it. I don't tell a lot of people, they look at me funny even if I say I have Korn's song "Porno Creep," so I don't want to know what they really think of me.

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  • nichtmich silver member
    September 2, 2008

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    This is really unusual for a person your age, but curiosity is natural. Most poets see and think a bit differently, I know I d The part where you say you'll put it in a song made me laugh Keep the pen to the paper and it will all turn out fine.