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Pearl Amongst The Pebbles

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Dedicated to those who stand out from the crowd!



Like a Lotus centre stage,
Or a pearl amongst the pebbles in a cage,
Surrounded by bauble type entities,
Crowned in glory and enthroned if you please..

Chequered reflective the baubles positioned on-look,
A spiked centrepiece catching the light come and look,
Like a secret conference of entities from another world,
Into an irregular arrangement they have been hurled!

Spiked and centred down in a basin-like dip,
What might this spiked ball go and nip,
Mesmeric of those who stand to spy,
What is in abstract before their eye!

This is a plastic man made plastic copy,
Of a flower with petals and centre so spiky,
Reflecting in light through glass paned windows,
Onto to the shiny surface of the baubled reflective rows...

In check-mate the spiked Lotus-like ball,
Mono-sepia in the round in a well lit hall,
Reflective like mirrors with their surface plastic,
How wonderfully mind twistingly abstract and fantastic!

Surrealist abstract modern art by design,
Could this be a strange omen or perhaps a sign,
Mirroring what is from another planet,
Something which you might call simply an it!

 

 

Copyright:K:September 2008

Author notes

Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
Contest Abstract poetry #28 -For Serious?- by Dr. Cube
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419697
NOTE!: Any generous contributions of points for future
contests is greatly appreciated! Thank you in advance!
Ok so the video prompt from last time didn't go off too well
I suppose so appologies about that. I guess I'll stick to
the original picture prompts for these contests. Anyway.
All rules are open so give me anything so long as it relates
to your feeling from the above provided picture entitled
"For Serious?" from Deviantart.com
Enter this contest
   * This is an anonymous contest - your name will be
hidden from editors
* Closes in 13 days, or after 7 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 500
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem



Picture credit: "For Serious?" from Deviantart.com

Picture depicts monochomatic baubles reflective of window
light through glass windows and a spiked centre piece.

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  • The Cube
    September 18, 2008

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    A very good write indeed. Though it does lean against what a lot of other people saw in the main picture, it is greatly written. Worthy of admiration and appreciation. Thank you for your entry.

  • mcfreeman
    September 3, 2008
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    Masterful...truly


    • Kazytc silver member
      September 3, 2008
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      Thanks millions

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Good luck in all your contests, I hope you win gold in all of them, your work is excellent.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    September 2, 2008

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    Kool, my head was spinning and my mind just wanted to keep raeding.

    I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 2, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it. Did you read if before I added the surreal backdrop?
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

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