so,
im not your best friend huh?
thats cool.
i mean,
i only give out false information,
right?
and,
not to mention the fact that i-
so you say-
think i know everything.
tell me,
dear friend of mine...
what false information did i give out,
because,
i know that you cheated on those two,
i know that you cheated on me,
and i know that you have been caught in the act,
god knows how many times.
talk to them,
maybe they will admit it.
because we have all talked.
i wanted to be your friend,
i wanted to have hope that we could happen,
if and when i met you.
but you,
silly little boy,
just ruined it all...
tell me,
how do you feel about it all now?
Author notes
im sure you get the picture... its very blunt and forward
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honest
I enjoyed this piece very much, I feel very strongly about everything you've said as it has happened to me many times and I currently am in the situation again. I think you said what a lot of other people should have said. It reads well and is honest. It was a delight to read.
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I think this is something that every one goes through eventually and you worded it and brought it out well this feeling of being betrayed by some whom you love. I am not sure if I am getting the right message but thats what i get. I like the style you used, different to the overage poem, like a nice rant =] it was good.
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Wow i like this one it was very good and i kno exactly what you mean and who u are talking bout mayb someday he will realize what he is doing and how much he is hurting himself and others who loved him
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