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my life without you


"who's gonna call you on Sunday morning?
who's gonna drive you home
i just want one more chance
to put my arms in fragile hands.?"

"tell why you cant live your life with me
so we can be together in this world of hate
so kill me now if your not going to be here
and come to my funeral ow---(hold for two secs)

kiss me on my lips and tell me your sorry
cause i'm living life without you"

A contest entry

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  • trinajean
    September 3, 2008

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    I like this piece,

    but i don't know if I like your use of the lyrics.

    also, please re-read the rules, you are missing a few things.

    and to avoid plagerism you should credit the band with the first stanza.

    overall, good piece.


  • LadyLuff
    September 2, 2008
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    aww this is beautiful darkie

    Loved it

    ~LadyLuff~

    x O x

    goodluck in the contest