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"10 Things I hate about you"

I hate the way you annoy me with little things
I hate the way you stare at me
I hate the way you hold my hand
I hate the way you dry my tears
I hate the way your always there for me
I hate the way your perfect to me
I hate the way you live so far
I hate the way you never there
I hate the way you play with my hair
I hate the way you kiss me
But most of all..I hate how I don't hate you
and I love you with every part of me & always will.

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  • DinkyDiver gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    such emotion. LOVE IT I can sense the frustration of how it is to love someone and hate how much it sometimes hurts


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    Just being honest, but there's too much repetition in this one.


    • Karlie67
      September 4, 2008
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      It's meant to be, its a 10 things I hate about you. If you watch the film 10 things I hate about you or you tube it, you'll understand maybe? This was for a contest anyway, not something I would usually write.

      Karlie
      xx