My Grandma Jordan passed away.
And I missed her alot.
I didn't think I would ever be close or care about anyone.
Like I did with her.
Years and Minutes went by hoping God would answer my prayer.
I thought it was going to be an unanswered prayer.
Then I realized it takes time to find such a great answer.
In May of this year, God gave me an answer.
It was the answer I was looking for.
God gave me what I believe to be an angel.
An angel sent from up above.
She was everything I dreamed about.
I wanted someone like that after my Grandma passed away.
She was beautiful, funny, caring, and sweet.
I loved her smile because it made me smile.
I loved her laugh because it made me smile and laugh.
I loved her hugs for they made me feel good inside.
Also her hugs made my heart feel complete.
Like all the pain and sadness my heart felt disappeared.
It was like everything my grandma had was in her.
God knew what he was doing when he sent me you.
He knew that would ease my pain and he knew I wouldn't complain.
I will love you forever no matter what comes in my life.
Forever you will stay in my heart no matter what happens.
Cause I miss you even when your right beside me.
And I worry when your not.
I think of you day and night.
Also Every minute, Every second, Every hour, and Every time were not hanging out.
When I started talking to you I wanted to meet you.
I got to meet you then I wanted to be with you.
I hope that dream becomes a reality.
Then I wouldn't wish for nothing else.
Author notes
To Shirree
I will always have feelings for you!!
Forever and Ever Beautiful!!
A contest entry
- A Friend to Treasure by BluRosePoet8488.
1000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 30 entries
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Comments
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A wonderful tribute that I find needs to be a bit more concise in its wording. I do feel the raw emotions within this one though and I do like it. God does His time in answering some prayers because he wants to find just the right answer. Thanks for entering. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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So much raw emotion is gathered within this work that you have here ... Sounds like you two were very close; I love the reference of the angels, that was well worded. best wishes in the competition
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Awww wow it sounds as if you really love this girl. Having that feeling about someone can be so amazing. I like how u tied the memory of your grandmother into this poem. Great write < 3 Brooklynn
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I love this poem the feelings inside of it is so real.... and I can tell that you care so much about this girl who is mentioned in the poem.... Sorry about your Grandma... I know what its like to loose a love one... and your always wishing that you can fill that void in your heart with something just as good or better... This poem seriously brought me to tears and I think that it is beautiful! Just remeber that she's always there when you need her you just talk to her and she'll be listening! This poem is great and I hpe that your dream does become a reality!
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that is so sad!
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Ugh! i liked the last part but still amazinger!
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Oh i'm sorry Pickles that last part you stole good job bad writers borrow good writers steal when you see her again she will love to see ur poems
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