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my friends are people who have no life in them

my imaginary friend

 

Diary entries carved into Sheetrock,
making walls my legacy and telling them all my tales.
The physical is negligent, so I hug the walls
like they're supportive parents.
 
Paint fumes and crayon stains,
attributes of my secret place.
He's so handsome, with a smile on his face.
 
And I sit here, dreaming
That my imagination would come out of the walls
and hold me,
 
never letting go.

Author notes

Option 1 - http://miamiam.deviantart.com/art/my-imaginary-friend-76696871

Lowercase Prelude

"First Day Of School Blues"

AP Family: The Lion With No Fear

AP Name: Lowercase Prelude
I am in princess of my love's AP family

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Comments

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  • BadBlood
    June 14

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    Beautiful! Short and simple yet it captures the entirety of the concept. Great job.


  • Blueisacolour
    February 27
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    Woww, I loved this.

    Very pretty.
    =)


  • gyllenstjert
    September 16, 2008
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    very nice. like sitting in a tree and having it caress you. made me happy.


  • Mrs. C.
    September 12, 2008

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    thanks for entering
    this is a very intresting poem. i like it a lot, reminds me of a poem of mine.


  • tortured-heart
    September 12, 2008

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    this one stings...its so real...good luck in your contest...its lookin like a good choice for a gold if you asked me
    peace, love, & cheese


  • 2lullabyhaven
    September 9, 2008

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    What's frightful about your piece is this is reality for many. Wow, you have touched a nerve, I think lol and good luck in the contests

  • She Stole My Voice
    September 6, 2008

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    "Paint fumes and crayon stains,
    attributes of my secret place.
    He's so handsome, with a smile on his face.

    And I sit here, dreaming
    That my imagination would come out of the walls
    and hold me,

    never letting go."


    I LOVE those stanzas :]
    Thank you for entering and good luck. ♥



    -rainbow.


  • Falling in Loveless
    September 5, 2008

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    i love this poem <3 its creative and really goes with the picture. thank you so much for entering the contest.


  • reckless abandon
    September 3, 2008

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    This poem is amazing, espicially with the picture. Great job, thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.


  • Ltecho13
    September 3, 2008
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    Very interesting I like the emotion put into this one


  • she still smiles x gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Amazinggg

    I truly enjoyed reading this! It was very unique and creative.
    You have such an amazing gift, to be able to write so eloquently and with such vivid imagery. Please don't stop!!

    Best of luck to you in the contest<3


  • penman gold member
    September 2, 2008
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    wonderful

    Oh my such great wording. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

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