Come, Come here little Hermit
Get out of that shell,
Stop hiding,residing in shadow
fighting yourself,deciding yourself
that your not worthy of the public eye.
Don't cry, no crying,no tears
those fears will dry up,fade
Absorbed by the crisp warmth of day light.
But it's deceiving, a backstabing force of hatred
It forgets to say the way
you'll wreck! you'll hit the ground
With a new found digust for the pounding of your heart..
Kicked
Flicked in the face
Licked by the pace of a steady flame
Society
They hate you and why?
Because your different.
But wait
Come,come here little Hermit
Get out of that shell..
Stop..
Hiding
A contest entry
- Without Rules by reckless abandon.
900 points, ended September 6, 2008, 113 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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This is an interesting piece. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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this has depth
more depth than first glance reveals .. and i like the way it ranges a gambit of emotion silently between the lines ... great write all together
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Ah, I like this one a lot. It really says a lot in every word you used. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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AH!!
Story of my life.
I know the feeling my friend.
sometimes i consider myself being a hermit .
I never want to leave the house, for i don't like to be judged by other people. I hate crowds,I Like to stay to myself where i know i'm safe. I don't even like to go into the stores by myself . That's crazy i know but it's true.
I'm a homebody.I don't have many friends because i like to stay in my own shawdow if that makes any sense to you?
Anyway Great write and i understood completely.
-Mandi
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Hi, I understand your point, it clearly speaks. A few typos
Each of my poems always has 5 of these lol.
Yeah- clear meaning. -
NICE
Awesome piece! Using the hermit crab scenario to explain how society looks at you if you are the slightest bit different is a brilliant concept. Great idea.
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
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