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Above the Influence

Astounded stand alone in the crowd
Bobbing head
On a string caught in
Victory game of losing
Empathy for oneself

Thorns pricked all over the body
Hemorrhaging sanity in the pits tasting
Esthetics of handed downs of others

Intriguing it all is, weaving
Never ending entangled web, crawling
Filth in the veins running thin
Leaving you begging for freedom
Under the blazing sun
Earnestly drooling stuck in the
Nowhere land of nothingness
Creeping life that doesn’t define you
Engulfing you leaving you nobody

….unless you decide to be not a puppet
…find your way to be you truly leading to
…a path of freedom to live your life above the influence

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 5, 2008

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    i think they should use this for those commercials, this would hit home for some people, keep it flowing


  • StarEyes
    September 2, 2008

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    Minoo,

    What a great read this one is! And you are soooooo right! I love it! Now if only the world would learn this lesson, then we would be on the right path!

    Great job my friend!

    and love

    Nyetta