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The Truth

The day is coming,
When you'll come undone,
They'll see you breathing,
Your death just begun.

The more you cry,
The more you scream,
Look to the sky,
There is no gleam.

Your mask is gone,
Pulled off your face,
There is no dawn,
Give up the race.

Fake's out-of-style,
You've lost your cover,
Don't even smile,
They will discover


The Truth.

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  • Slick99
    September 15, 2008

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    this is like TOTALLY awesome Julia!! i like it ALOT!!! a silver trophy well deserved!!! thanks so much for sharing! have a nice day, -slick99


  • Redeemed15
    September 2, 2008

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    kool poem julia! i love the rhyme. thanks for entering and good luck in both my contest and any future contests that you may enter. lol