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Too Much

      Haiku cannnot hold
 
  Everything I am inside
     
              Watch me while I break rules

A contest entry

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  • Samplette gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    A very well crafted Haiku! Excellently crafted. Thank you for entering the contest, I liked this one.
    Sam


  • Poesing
    September 3, 2008
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    That's what it's all about! Great job!