Peeping.
Around the corner
What awaits
I'm staring through
These rusty gates
Glaring at this
Fateful tide
Of mystery
My face I'll hide
And wonder what
Shall be undone
Goodness me!
What's to become
Of all I left behind
If I step around
This loosely quar--
What's around this stony column
Staring blatantly at me
What will happen if I take this step
Will I perish; shall I cherish
All that's given unto me?
__INCOMPLETE__
Author notes
Credits to phill-strang of deviant art.
EOTS
A contest entry
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360 points, ended September 15, 2008, 16 entries
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I chose fumes poem over your only beacause i felt here poem was stronger thank you for entering
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i like this... All the best..!
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It's complete... by the way.
~Asa of the Strange Poems of Changing Plans -
I'm staring through
these rusty gates
outside your house,
are you about to undress?
Sowwy, I couldn't help myself
Great poem Asafications.
♥ Jojo the orange Tic-Tac eater -
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EOTS. Apologies.
~Asa of the Scythes of Prison
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