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Inbetween the dark and bright

Bending the twines and blending the times,
I'll massacre this substance.
Black and white and gray aligned;
Well now it's just a waste of lines.
This beauty secreted from evolving vows
Intermingling the solid light and dark.
I will not stay and fade within these,
I cannot give into this burning,
That forceful way of building lies, breaking ties.
Refusal to sit and do nothing;
So tonight I will stop and breathe in serenity.

To open her eyes, open her wings,
Spread about and sing.
Still strong in doubt yet unaware of my surroundings,
Open petals embrace the beauty, I am me
I am different
I chose to stand out in this subtle tide wave.

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  • The Cube
    September 18, 2008

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    This is a very nice poem. Though the feeling from it are strong, it has a really good subtle sense to it that makes it smooth and not seem so rushed. thanks for entering


  • PiratexxLove
    September 2, 2008
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    my computer was messing up when I tried to add the picture