Take my hand,
I'll hold you tight,
It's your heartbeat keeping me sane tonight
Kiss my lips,
Close your eyes,
It's my wish granted under these midnight skies
It's you I keep,
Deep in my mind and heart,
Until the daylight when we grow apart
Every night,
I'll whisper to you,
I love you dearly I swear that's true
You appear,
Every night or so it seems,
Showing my passion as the full moon gleams
I can't give you anything worldly,
I can't give you the stars,
But under them tonight their beauty is ours
I'll never forget,
All you've done for me,
I can look back on these nights and smile with glee
But now,
Slowly as I wake,
Eyes well up and tears begin to quake
You're my illusion,
In my head in a swirl
I'll love you anyway
My wonderful dreamer girl
Author notes
It's been waiting to be completed on my phone for weeks now, so here it is
Comments
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Really good, this word be great lyrics in my opinion. I like the ending really cool. Good Work!
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man, that was great. a little sad, but thats the best poetry i guess. impressive.
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Whose it about? Is it me? Oh oh pick me!!
I can't give you the stars,
But under them tonight their beauty is ours
I liked that line the most because it brings back memories of star gazing together. Aww such a pretty piece!
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"Every night,
I'll whisper to you,
I love you dearly I swear that's true"
Aww! It's such a beautiful poem then it became kinda sad =( But I guess that's ok. I love the poem style you've used, it flows beautifully >.<
And I know who you're talking about...i think...But she doesn't have to be an illusion...
I'm going to make up a word for it, awetastic.
It tastically put me in awe.
-Swintha
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