I miss you so much I want to cry...
An ocean of life separates us, but I feel you inside of me always. All I need do is close my eyes to see your sweet smiling face, the passion of your heart, and the laughter held just beneath the surface of your lips.
I miss you so much I want to cry...
I want to feel your hands on my face. I want to hear the joy and surprise in your voice, when you say, "You came! You're really here with me!" I want to feel the warmth of your embrace that makes my own heart sing. I want to see the light dance across your face and in your eyes as you tell me of all you did before I came to you. And then I want to hear your happy heart beating in my ears as I lay my head on your chest and smell the warm air and sunshine that is you.
I miss you so much I want to cry...
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just..... no words can tell...!!!
this is so heartfelt sweet and sad.. o daear your words are like waves that needs to rush to the sea , like flowers that needs to blossom , like a bird that needs to sing a melody of pain.. your words are simply appeal the hunger of love wich is much more difficult to remove than the hunger of bread.. your words just made me feel all that.. because they are real.. and hope the flowers would blossom , the waves reach the shore and the bird would sing swwet melodies. and that your love would be tehre again for you..
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You melt my heart with such a sweet comment...that you felt the words...what more can a poet ask of a reader?...and a new friend...Peace always, Rhonda
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Hope your lovely feeling last as long as you want. For me it is just like mirage may be because I am habituated to get the dark side of God and world Who/which, it seems to me, always ready to punish me for whatever fault I have or my misdeeds in my past, of may be millions of years in other births.
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I can certainly feel the passion in this verse. It's penned like a prose but flows like metric Free Verse. You have a wonderful poetic voice and I as a reader can look deep into your loving heart.
Love,
Amera♥
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I want to hear the joy and surprise in your voice, when you say, "You came! You're really here with me!"
I want to see the light dance across your face and in your eyes as you tell me of all you did before I came to you.
Stunning...
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I love it, there is so much emotion and longing in your words that it is easy for me to see how much you care about this person and how much it hurts for you to be away from them. Very simple and straight forward, straight from the heart to the page as it should be.
-Garrett
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Ha! very nice
the feelings and the emotions between the lines are superb.luckey are those who are being loved by some one with such pure heart.
hey listen to this...it's by W.B.Yeats....
"I heard an old religious man
But yesternight declare
That he had found a text to prove
That only God, my dear,
Could love you for yourself alone
And not your yellow hair."
thanks for sharing your sweet thoughts...Haba Haba...meaning, see you!
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Thanks for your sweet thoughts too Ahkam. Always a pleasure when you leave me a snippet of the old masters poetry...and this is a favorite. Peace to you, my friend, Rhonda
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Ummm, sigh...
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aw....thanks...
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Very Good
So many mixed emotions...but what really matters is that someone who is loved and and can love the best way has to undergo this. Bitter-sweet, never too good or bad, always the longing that remains...love works its magic for those who believe in togetherness. Let it be so, whether you cry or smile...a very beautiful piece. I simply loved it.
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I don't think I can better this comment...
only to put more emphasis for the keeping in this part:
'love works its magic for those who believe in togetherness. Let it be so, whether you cry or smile...a very beautiful piece.
... yes!
Sol
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