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Never-Ending Love

I saw you the other day
knew it for sure
that we were meant to be
I wanted to be yours


show me that you feel
console me with love
show me nothing less
except all the above


loving you so truly
keeps my heart alive
thinking about you
helps me survive


I feel my heart beat
In the rhythm of your life

makes me dream

About being your wife


I sleep with dreams

so vivid and clear

thinking about you

I have not a fear


Imagining you smile

Lights up my day

Sets me dreaming a while

And lead my thoughts astray


To be so near you

and yet so far

displeases my hope

that shines like a star


I wish too much

that causes my sorrow

thats all I have

thats all you can borrow


To feel your pain

Is my dream
To engage in your activities

Is another wanted extreme


I speak with truth

I love with my heart

I remain forever yours

you complete me in every part










 

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  • Learning2PaintYou
    November 11, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry.


  • SchizoChic
    October 1, 2008

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    Oh how love can build us up or tear us apart. Sounds like you know you have a good one there. Hold on to it! Best of luck in life and in this contest.


  • sapphireangelwings
    September 28, 2008
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    Beautifully penned!


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    September 27, 2008

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    Gorgeous

    I loved the rhythm and flow of this piece...all of you will make this difficult to judge. Great write mandie

  • beautifully human
    September 4, 2008

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    loving you so truly
    keeps my heart alive
    thinking about you
    helps me survive


    this is my favorite part. its crazy to think that a person exists soley to love another, but i think this is the reason why we are all created simply and complexy to love someone else. the entire poem is full of emotion. i think anyone who has experienced true love can relate.


  • BitterDreamer
    September 3, 2008

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    wow--everything flowed very very well..and it was full of amazing emotion.
    crazy how it fits my life right now. thanks for sharing


  • sora.
    September 3, 2008
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    beautiful.
    =]

  • babykakes08
    September 2, 2008

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    great peice. its a lil strange bcause i feel this way about someone right now and it blows my mind that you wrote a great peice.

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