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The Boundaries of Gravity

The vibrating crash
Of the world around me
Allows me to lay my head
Into nightmares
Haunting my dreams of eternity

Empty, deadly memories
My mood swings around the bend
As romance slips into gravity
And my heart forgets to beat
And my lungs forget to breathe
The epitome of goodness
Shades itself in the crysalis
Of a butterfly
The universe lives in silence
As the oblivious ashamed
Rest their heads into
Apocalyptic clouds
But don't come back down  
In the catastrophic sense
Of simple dignity
And to understand
The boundaries of gravity.

Author notes

I really like this, I didn't expect it to turn out to be one of my favorites

"and I don't hear my own soul scream"
And yes, I used spell check.

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  • CinderellaSyndrome
    September 7, 2008
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    This was lovely. I didn't expect to like it as much as I do. Very well written.


  • Xombii
    September 2, 2008

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    Thank you for using spell check ^.^

    This poem is very lovely,
    and I'm glad that words I provided helped create on of your favourite poems ^.^
    I can see why, this write is really good.

    Haunting my dreams of eternity
    Empty, deadly memories
    My mood swings around the bend
    As romance slips into gravity
    And my heart forgets to beat
    And my lungs forget to breathe


    My favourite lines.
    Thank you for entering
    and good luck

    Lish