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Wandering Circus

This sad barren waste-land
Was where the crowd campaigned
Here they'd gaze in wonder
At what cannot be explained

The tallest woman that ever lived
The strongest of them too
A man so fat the children cried
And some acrobatics too

They all corralled the weary crowd
With promises of delight
And caramel covered everything
That can be bought all night

But where that stood, now is nothing
But a field full of mice
And a abandoned dirty sign
That exclaimed the price

No worries now, they will return
Though it may take awhile
They always wander back this way
To make all the children smile






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Simply In Love

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  • takemypainaway
    September 14, 2008

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    your poem WON because of the smile factor!! thank you for entering and Congrats you will be moving on!!
    --kat


  • takemypainaway
    September 14, 2008
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    this poem really fit this picture and it made me smile!!


  • takemypainaway
    September 2, 2008
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    username??