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Containment

 

 

Once again, our swords clash,
creating new wounds
[and reopening old ones].
Guilt runs freely,
rivulets of deep crimson
leading to resevoirs of self-accusation.

A war is raging within my members
[The casualty list is long].
Selfish desires clench
pure intentions in a stranglehold.
I have seen this death-match before,
and I abhor the inevitable outcome.

Any ground gained
[so precious the cost!]
will soon be relinquished
to self-deception and rationalization.
An unpardonable policy of containment,
set on repeat within my deviant heart.

In my flesh dwells no good thing,
yet this battle is far from over.
There is One who can deliver me
from this prison of Sin and Death.
I have only to accept

His outstretched

[nail-scarred]

hand.



Author notes

Inspired by the quote "Every human being is a single piece, enduring in two pieces"

and by Romans 7:18 "For I know that in me (that is, in my flesh) dwelleth no good thing; for to will is present with me: but how to perform that which is good I find not."


Every person is waging an internal war between their two natures...the side which wants to please God, and the side which wants to please self.


To those unfamiliar with the policy of containment...it was formulated to "contain" communism without taking any aggressive action aginst it. The objective was not to defeat it, just not to let it gain any new ground. So, if, in a skirmish, we won new ground, it would immediately be relinquished in the name of containment. This policy was in place during the Korean War, as well as in Vietnem.

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  • I have seen this death-match before,
    and I abhor the inevitable outcome.






    Inevitable indeed. For no matter how much I long to please Him I inevitably end up doing the opposite. I have been through this road. Studied and searched and prayed my way to more truth and information than anyone should ever be allowed. Even the governments birthed by the devil. World Wars are lies. They sank the Titanic. God is more real than anything we can see in front of our face.

    But why did He put us here? To be pawns in the devil's game? I don't want to be a pawn. I feel as if I'm living life for no reason. For soon, I will be burning in a hell where it won't matter if I wrote good poetry, finished school with a perfect gpa, or became the best wife and mother I could. Nothing will matter.

    If the world was going to end with most of us in hell why did he even bother putting us here in the first place? Why make us have an inner desire to be good when all we do is mess things up?

    Why give us the ability to dream and plan families and futures if He was coming back to seperate us from those things and take them away?

    The inner struggle.


    Does it ever feel like there are two of you dancing toe to toe in your mind? Just waiting to see which one will tire first?

    Is it usually the right side that tires first?


    Do I make any sense?



  • logorrhoea
    September 19, 2008

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    Idiots like me forget the Bible as a place to find poetic inspiration. Strong message here, a well deserved silver and thankyou for the reminder..


  • PoetryStar2
    September 6, 2008
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    very nice lotz of big word


  • Iyaden
    September 4, 2008

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    Breathtaking indeed. Not sure if the meaning matches your autor notes but to me it made sense on another level.


  • SomeGirlYouKnew
    September 3, 2008

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    i like this a lot
    and thank you for explaining in your author notes. it made the poem a whole lot more meaningful.
    very well done.


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow...

    Gave me tingles...

    It's the last couple of lines. Stuff like this doesn't usually touch me.


  • liza
    September 3, 2008

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    So very very true, I love this and the message behind it. My favorite part must be how this can be applied to ANY internal struggal, addictions, depression, self injury...the list is endless.


  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    September 3, 2008
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    Amazing poem, keep up the amazing work. Better then something I could ever write [:


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 3, 2008

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    This is really a sharp edged poetry ..I love it..well done..and thank you so much my friend.. for entring my contest...

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