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BE GOOD TO YOURSELF (come as you are)

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When meter breaks,

and rhyme is nil,

bring eyes and ears

to Christ's windowsil.

 

Raise up your hands

to touch your face,

reflected fully in

pane's free embrace.

 

i

do not know how

i

am to pray for this cover,

but in my mourning,

in my waiting,

i

learned to embrace the empathy of God.

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  • Stirrer of Stardust
    August 23
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    Wow.....

    This is beautiful. Very fitting title. Love the content, placement, emphasis!

    Blessings,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


  • Rose Angel gold member
    June 3
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    Ooh...what a gem you have written from deep inside your spirit, as you wait for the cover of your book...You have captured the searching for God's connection with you through the window pane...a window to God.
    Along the path of reading you have become a special person in my discoveries...I will be reading more....Do keep penning from that beautiful soul!

    • Timothy Cameron gold member
      June 9
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      Be Good To Yourself (Christ's Windowsil)

      Thanks for bringing me back to this. I appreciate and am touched you care to read below the surface. I do not have computer service, so I can't get online often. Sorry for my slow responses, but that's what slows me down.


  • luckynsincere
    September 22, 2008

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    How awesome and how true are these words. The image is simply entriquing as well.

    We must catch up

    Mel


  • Redstormy gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Words of wisdom my friend

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