I miss the mountain top,
I feel myself falling,
I have to grab onto something,
I need my Jesus he'll keep me strong,
I dont want to go back,
to the ways of the world,
down at the bottom,
as I try to pull them up,
they slowly pull me down,
we need Jesus he can keep us strong,
at the bottom is so much pain,
I dont want to go back,
but im falling
we need your help Jesus,
please help us all,
to get back to the mountion top.
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Comments
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This is a great poem.
Keep up the great writing.
Thanks for entering my contest.
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awww i really feel like that!!
thank you
this has helped alot!
u can enter more than one btw -
Nicely done ; it's good to see someone with so much faith, and trust in their God =) Best wishes for the contest
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Aww very beautiful spiritual poem
filled with the hope of rising again
from crumble. Lovely thoughts in this
I very much agree; Jesus will ALWAYS
be there to pick up the pieces
when we fall.
All we have to do is say His name..
and ask.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Hmm...certainly not anti-religion
Or is it?
Explain?
do you know this is an anti-religion contest? Or did you purposely post it here to make somewhat of a statement of disapproval for this contest?
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Okay, okay you have my biggest petbieve going here. "I" is a prouper noun so it is always capitalised NO MATTER WHAT.
Okay now that that's out of the way you got a really great poem here I loved it. Just fix that minor error and you'll have a great poem. -
Amen. Jesus is loving and shall never leave. We need God to get back to the mountain..and nothing..EXCEPT Jesus will get us there. God bless and amazing work with this one!
WArmest,
Mylee -
this is amazing! Definetly a finalist
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life is like climbing a mountion
and God is the belayer.
=)
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very nice poem you have here
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the mountain top is an amazing place to be, theres no doubt. Keep your eye on the goal son, not on the problems, or the trials. Our God is an awesome God, and without fail, He will always be there to pick you guys up :-). Good write son, no doubt.
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Great read! So true! I like the way it's written and everything^^
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