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In the days of long ago, lived an witch, Eva, she had a hunger and thirst for power. She lived in a time when man was ruler and lord over his own land. He had to fight to protect it or an usurper would come along and take it from him. Near the small village were Eva lived, there were two lords both had shown an attraction to her but she was greedy she wanted to have both of their lands to herself and hold their power in her hands and the people under her thumb. The more she thought on this the more she carved this, so she came up with a plan.

Lord Alex not one to come out during the daytime, it was rumored that he was a ladies man and often these women came up missing.  Some even thought of him has a vampire. Now on the other side Lord Randall, he something of a brute but also still very handsome. It was whispered that on a full moon he really did turn to  a beast. Eva was attracted to them both and she planned to seduce both of them, she just needed to get the timing right.

So on the night just before the full moon, and right when her period started, the time was now to seduce Lord Randall, but little did she know that the smell of the blood would attract Lord Alex. Upon seeing her in  a sheer dress, was all it took, he had to have her in more ways then one. Moving faster then any man she has ever seen, he was beside her, bestowing kisses and caresses to her. Eva began to wonder if she was the one being seduced instead of the other way around.  Just has he enters her with one hard thrust, he bites her neck, marking his claim. Weakened she falls into a trance, has Lord Alex leaves her sated and unknowing to him with child.

Upon the midnight hour, Lord Randall is making his normal rounds, walking through the forest, this is the only time he truly feels free. When he scents a mate and she is in heat, he starts running through the forest, his own animal instincts take over. He comes to a grove, one that he often comes to just to get away and Eva is there. In a sheer dress, tempting him and he can smell she is in heat and waiting for him. Eva calls to him and rips off her dress. Randall can take no more, he is by her side in seconds.

Eva smiles because her plan is going better then she ever thought it would. Randall is a rough lover but she finds that she likes this side of him. He turns her over on her hands and knees and takes her from behind, just has he bites her on back of her neck, marking his territory. Eva leaves a happy Lord Randall, sleeping in the grove, with a smirk on her lips knowing that she now carries not one but two babes, one of Lord Alex and one of Lord Randall.

These babes will not only be her key weapons but it will be the beginning of war.

To be continued….

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This is how the war all began, with a little push from a woman.

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  • Mykeee
    December 3, 2008
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    Amazing - love the seduction and how it lead to a mystery I'm waiting to read more of. so cool


  • Galaxy2
    October 9, 2008

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    Wow....
    Two babes hunted by one hunter....
    That's an interesting start...
    A pleasant, lustful start of a fascinating game...
    Kisses all over...touching your sweet neck...
    Galaxy2


  • ennovy silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Wow...this is the very very beginning....and you have me looking for more of this tale....an excellent story and I can wait for the rest...novy


  • Dark Otter
    September 23, 2008

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    Just one push?

    A witch that knows her own power, her feminine nature burns to be acknowledged. Will she carry her two half breeds to term? What roles will they play in her life and in the kingdom? Stay tuned for the next chapeter reveals all. Good start to your story.


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    I love your take on this the war for both vampires and lycans. Welcome to the war dear Eva, may you and your children survive.

    The Black Dragoness


  • FlamesDragoness
    September 4, 2008

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    your evil and twisted of deeds do not go un-noticed
    upon the thrones of honor, which we defend the Lairs
    of Dragon.

    Are thee wise or foolish meat tempting angers of vampyre.
    WE shall close keep ancient eye upon the plight
    of your offspring and soul.

    tempt not...we are not fools like the vampyre!
    temptress of witch!
    flamingdragoness


  • Wolf Mancini
    September 3, 2008

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    Welcome Witch...

    You have entered a place of pain and blood.
    Another mystic to feed upon.

    I am Vidos Allisorio



    Great tale you have created...excellent work.
    I like the style and flow!

    wolf


  • Brazos silver member
    September 2, 2008

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    Good grief, just what we need, two more slobbering hedge-hogs running around who can't decide what they want to be! No matter, you have been bitten as well, and now you must answer to I, the Lycan King, along with the other riff-raff of the underworld. The only question now is, do ye stand w'me, or a'gin me? Methinks, tis better to be a live slave than a dead half-breed...

    Tis my wish for you to choose wisely and live, for I want of you to finish the tale you have started; tis quite captivating indeed!

    Brazos


  • SulfurFiend
    September 2, 2008

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    that story was amazing! it was like a legend told over a calm camp fire...very nice art work at the begining...but when you say to be continued i want to know more! please don't keep me waiting long...i'll be keeping an eye out for ur work...


  • Terry Collett
    September 2, 2008
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    Engaging work.

    A good and engaging work which i hope to continue.

  • ennovy silver member
    September 2, 2008
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    Tis a darknees she hast revealed of greed, and a desire of power to be fullfilled. You have taken me on a journey that will have no end. Now I crave for more of this tale.....so you must continue the saga. Excellent vile wicked story of this vixen of passion with her belly full of the future......Thank you for sharing with us about the war, and about it's beginning....I AM....ennovy

    Magnificent


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