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"Hypothetically Speaking"

Hypothetically speaking,what if there was a girl
and she was strange and awkward with feelings perverse
sympathetically shreaking along with this world

she found an innocent soul and began to converse.

Loving and fighting,living and dying,fingers danced upon skin

So used to the shadows and all that never mattered

she claimed that "Oh,she must leave...." until she returned again

One year later,she came back and waited for three days she hated

the fact that the innocent beauty had grown numb

"Oh! Can you feel me,please tell me you need me.."

The words that she needed to say would not come....

But by some means of persuasion,the lovers rose to the occasion

to make damn sure this equation could never be wrong again...

the strange plus the innocent equalled love that is omnipotent...

Although this love could quite possibly be a sin? (No!!)

Is it a cycle we go in,the great hereafter will they still be as now

the loving the fighting the living then dying...her fingers dancing on skin?

The fingers dancing on skin.....

 

 

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  • individuality gold member
    March 19

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    ah love, it is a grand thing to find, no matter where, or of society's views, someimes madcap. love is not a sin, it is jst simply love - a good poem.

  • Wow, you are in love,
    im so happy
    life doesn't remain painful all the time, there is always some one to give us love more than our expecations, i wish you live happy
    won't you tell me the dear name
    Wow
    by
    The poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • HeartNumb
    October 12, 2008

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    Amazing

    This poem dances on my mind, and so many questions come to mind, Wow, you're such a great poet, The theme is addicting, i miss you like crazy, hit me back - i want to give you my new numbers im online again--Mugga---->>>Chicken