I told you,
what I want,
what I need,
now it's your turn to please.
I want you to play the whore,
for me,
now get down on your knees.
I want you to take my penis,
in your hands,
rub it to and fro,
don't stop until I say so.
now open your mouth,
put my penis in
and give me the best,
blow job,
there has ever been.
I want to feel your
tonsils on my shaft,
I want to see you gag.
As you work your mouth,
suck and blow,
swallow my come in one go.
what you carn't swallow,
let it drip,
over your perfect tits.
Then I will,go down on you,
spreading you lips wide,
fingers, going inside,
getting you wet,
moving my penis into you,
fucking you,,
as only I can do.
I will bring you so high,
you won't need another guy.
Author notes
Normally I write romance, this is a first.
A contest entry
- Tease Me, Please Me by sensualbutterfly.
450 points, ended September 10, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awesome poem Carl!! I didn't know u had it in u!!!

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Thanks neither did I
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WOW....


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thank you, Carl.
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mmmmmmm very tasty :-)
Loved it
If this was your virgin attempt I can't wait for more!!! -
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Watch this space, thanks carl.
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For a first, this was pretty good! You should try your "hand" at if more often! LOL! Really good job!
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Thank you I think I surprised my self.Carl.
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