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[ The eyes of the wounded ]

The eyes of the wounded
Are stretched forth to heaven
And their chapped lips
Come to confess His name.

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    September 16, 2008

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    not bad for 4 lines, kinda feels like you slapped this together though, no title, a bit easy to see through, this would do better In a quickie contest, can't stand up to some of the better entries I've read so far