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In The Forest

a seekers treasure
startled upon
within the
benighted forest 

shadows danceing
against naked limbs
full in bloom
with crimson glow

vacant of patrons
unseen domains
only stark hollow
of haggard trees

mystical playground
of wistful breezes
where reverent spirits
have amassed

flicker as they flit   
gathered about  

to compare ghostly

gossip stories

 

  

Copyright 2008 Shelly Price

(c) Nevadapoet

 


 

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Nice Job!

    Congrates on the HM my friend!
    I enjoyed this write indeed! I appreciate you sharing here.
    Bravo sweet soul, and I hope to read ya again soon!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


    • nevadapoet
      September 14, 2008
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      Thank you as always for visiting and commenting. Your comments touch me, truly.
      Nevadapoet


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    A most wonderfully creative take onthe pictuer! Excellent imagery in this. Thank you so much for your entry
    Gaylene


    • nevadapoet
      September 14, 2008
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      I don't know if I got around to thanking you for the HM from your contest. This was a stretch for my writing style and I appreciated the challenge.
      Be Well,
      Nevadapoet


  • Riamh
    September 2, 2008
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    Another wonderful write. well done, as always, a pure pleasure to read.

    Slayer

    • nevadapoet
      September 14, 2008
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      And as always to you dear Slayer...I thank you.
      Nevadapoet

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