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Trapdoor in the Tree Lit Wood!

Dedicated to all wooded explorers!



I lifted the trapdoor lid, and peered out..
Written memos previously hid, flew around and about...

The illuminations in dark trees, somewhat eerie,
If you please, their glow was warm and cheery..

Made for a fantasy-like ambiance, perhaps a place for fairies,
To merrily dance, amidst the wooded caries!

Trees with feet like claws reach out to grip,
The little invisible fairy feet that wander, what a trip!

I closed the trapdoor lid and went back to sleep,
Dreaming about what I might see if I re-opened it for another peep!



Copyright:K:August 2008

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Allpoetry.com Contest
Contest PIF/Picture Inspired by AliceinPoetryLand
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419687
Hello and welcome to my PIF that I won from CAROLINE MOON
Picture found from Google Images
10 poets
10 lines more or less.
Gold please PIF for 300 points
Have fun!
Gaylene
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* Closes in 3 days, or after 7 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem



Picture depicts:
Enchanted woodland scene with holes in trees alight and a trap door in the ground and open written scrolls floating through the air.
Very alluring beautiful picture and a joy to work on and see.
Could have written lots more than 10 lines on this fabulous prompt!

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Wow! So very creative and imaginative! Your imagery and rhyme is wonderful also. Thank you so much for this poetic journey
    Gaylene


    • Kazytc
      September 2, 2008
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      Thanks millions Gaylene!

      Thanks millions Gaylene, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • Riamh
    September 2, 2008

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    I loved this so much Kaz. Best of luck in the contest. Awesome background too!

    Slayer


    • Kazytc
      September 2, 2008
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      Thanks millions Slayer!

      Thanks millions Slayer, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging. You honour me with your reviews since your poems are phenomenal.
      Glad you liked it. I design all of my own backgrounds thesedays, this inclusive, glad you liked that too, your pages are all phenomenal.
      Good luck in all your contests, I hope you win gold in all of them, your work is excellent.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX