Good Morning Darling
Open those big blue eyes
So I can melt here before you
You know this isn't a surprise
Next, give me a wink
And then your beautiful grin
So I can get myself ready
For another day to begin
Next your dreamy voice
Will set my heart on fire
Gosh! I'm the luckiest girl
My life you do inspire
You have a certain way with you
That sets me all aglow
No matter what you say or do
This one thing I want you to know
You are the one that makes me smile
You're the one who stirs my heart
Without darling my world would fade
Let us never, ever, part
Author notes
option #4
A contest entry
- Anti-Gravity Love Song by Xombii.
600 points, ended September 20, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very good.
I like this, and the rhyming was there, but the poem itself didn't thrive on it, and it still flowed well.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
But please read the rules again.
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