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Sweet 'n' Sour Storyline

Standing afar
We see time fly by
Expressing goodbye
Effect free we close our eyes
Taking the train to destination

Not the one we dreamed once when

Simple rules we lived by
Our storyline was written in innocence
Utopia we created building sand castles
Ripples of smiles we made on our faces

Shades of purity
Tip-toed on little feet
Only colors we loved were
Rainbow in the skies
Yelling to the stars we looked for fairies
Laughed on hard just to laugh
In our hearts we had unshaken faith
Nesting dreams and aspirations we believed in then – but now…are
Eroded in the waves of life when we forgot the sweet ‘n’ sour storyline of our childhood

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Where does time go? when do we forget to live? Just wondering...

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  • cometwriter
    September 10, 2008
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    Awesome!

    It has a weird random beat to to it. Anyway love it. Keep writing!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 5, 2008
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    i think time just passes us by when we forget that life isn't standing still, keep it flowing

  • dillpickle62
    September 2, 2008

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    I can't...

    Answer this question. I've not forgotten yet. Living each and every day as if my last. Enjoying what is just out my door.
    Still filled with youth the rascal in me never seems to grow old.