As the sun beams through the clouds
as the moon stays adrift in the night's sky
We wonder the mystery's universe the completion
and purpose of the night's frigid air.
Finding purpose in these things
and daydreaming about worlds other than our own
I found my fantasies in words
written in poetic form.
My saddest heartbreaks
forbidden friendships
true love
mourning heart
all pulled through
along the pages of poetry.
Spreading the joy
and deep cleansing of souls
lies in letting the emotions run wild and free
Even found on cold bitter days
muse adjoining along levels misunderstood.
Alas,
in the land of poetry
where the freedom to wander in any direction is true
here in the realms where we
read each other's heart
Asking humbly
if one could spare a little points
for a poor wretched soul
from one poet to another.
A contest entry
- Want My Points? by pattyann4500.
3250 points, ended September 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I feel your realities here poet. I am loving the connection between myself and others which think, feel, and write poetically. Excellent work here!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Well, this is certainly excellent! You have a way with words and have put such emotion in your poem. Thank you so much, dear Poet, and good luck in the contest. Patricia
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You are no Hypocrite.
I have read through most of your poems and find you are true in your raw emotions.
People think that they must be kept hidden.
In a way it is true. As a poet you can easily do that by choosing words that hypocrites will not object to as being offending.
Beyond Lust, as I too have felt in my teens there is love for the beauty as it moves around you.
Focus on it will release excess energy into the beauty all will love.
How wonderful it would be to see you judge others and find out for yourself where to go in your passion.
Congrats this is a wonderful poem and your style is what I like most.
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