Love and shyness are not incomparable;
on the contrary, both are perfectly satisfied,
the timidity creates between two people with mutual respect,
and just being in love is necessarily to be a little shy.
When someone really loves the heart satiates,
before the election makes fight to spread sentiments,
loses its words, dares not to say everything retained,
even to just need love, comfort and soft cuddles.
To say we can expect a beautiful story,
in arms of each other, to forget everything
of which you're a part.
Each manages a shyness as wanted as can sent,
even there is no deadline for revealing the feelings.
It's so beautiful a couple who loves over the day,
the mystery and the unexpected are the parents of great love.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Mystery of Love
A contest entry
- Mystery Of Love by SummerlandRayne.
499 points, ended September 24, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm lost here, so I will return again.I still don't get it. It appears there is a problem with tenses. Like maybe you used verbs for nowns or visa versa.
Good luck. ROSE -
Very nice and wise thoughts here...thanks for the entry!
Az
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