why do i love thee
let me count the ways
1. i love thee for there little considerations they show toward not only myself but others even if they don't deserve it
2. i love thee for there unconditional forgiveness and understanding
3. i love thee for the way he fills up my day with just a simple word or gesture
4. i love thee for the simple pleasures he invokes in me
5. i love thee for his huge caring heart and soul
6. but most of all i love thee cause of the person inside.......the man he is.......the one that captured my once broken heart and mended it with 3 little words
A contest entry
- Mystery Of Love by SummerlandRayne.
499 points, ended September 24, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I give truthful comments so if you would rather delete me then do so.
There is some minor mispelling and incorrect usage of of tenses. I believe you meant to do this the way I outlined. Either way, good luck. Rose
for there little> should be the
they show> you show
thee for there. again 'the unconditional'
way he fills >you fill my day
pleasures he invokes> you invoke in me
for his huge > for your huge
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I adore this...thanks for the entry!
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thank you
i wasnt sure it was what you wanted but i'm glad you liked it if nothing else.....
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