Sunkissed child; Bless this day.
Close your eyes, listen to the waves.
The heat of your love - -
Rushes along the shore.
Little child, have you felt this safe before?
A contest entry
- Summer Is Not Yet Over Picture Prompt by Rose Angel.
550 points, ended September 18, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Though short, your lines are just full of inspiration, love and the heart of a young girl..Your imagery shines through your lines, and then ends in "Little girl have you ever felt this safe before?" A wonderful
end to the write...This short poem stands on it own as a beautiful write!
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Very nice!
Short and sweet does it! -
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Thanks much =]
xx
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short sweet and to the point, my favorites :]
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Thank you, pretty =]
xx
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