Before open source
two slipped before lip met lip
through renewed life force.
Limitless promise
Then hibernation, tasteless,
limitless promise
Waiting, becoming,
from hibernation, tasteless,
wakes, ends numbing.
From an open source
two sip before lip meets lip
discover life force
Many dimensions
learn to create, and expand
with no dissentions
Shared intuitions
Encourage interfaces
Fusion and fission
Guidelines disappear,
unjustified pride down drain
drips with worry, fear.
New vistas appear
as both know both know both feel -
synergy sincere !
Eternity, once dear,
were those precious moments shared
horizons clear ?
After open source
two slip before lip meets lip
apprehend life force.
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A contest entry
- Senryu string contest ... quickie... 20 POETS by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended September 10, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Courtesy welcome and extended
Comments
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Apprehensions and limitless life force... well penned string.
Thanks for your participation.
Good luck,
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Excellent
A very good write, indeed. You expressed yourself quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
I love your words, Scribe...all of 'em.
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Wonderful!
Dear Jonathan,
this has become one of my favorite ways of writing!
You have done a wonderful job here...
this darts from thought to thought like
a monarch to goldenrod...
it is a beach dance in my mind!
Bravo! Jane
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