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the truth birthday points

why do i think i deserve
these points you have to give
i suppose a sob story i could fake
but the truth i think i'll stick with

the truth is that i don't at all
i have some of my own

why should you even consider me
worthy of your rewards
give to me over all the others
the points that you have earn

the truth i tell you i don't at all
i still have some of mine

why do i enter this poem then
if not to gain your points
i was bored, nothing else to do
and your contest was right there

 

PS......

one more thing will i type

then i'll go away

i noticed the date ending this

and that just happen to be my birthday

 

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  • pattyann4500
    September 15, 2008

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    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! You share this wonderful day with my older brother.

    Your honesty is so refreshing, and I reallly enjoyed your poem. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck in the contest. Patricia