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put you faith in other moments
let the levee hold back the sea
we can hold in saintly honour
for the love we lost and grieved
holding out for other chances
make believing life is fair
dreaming of those other places
in despair and disrepair
who will wait for you now?
is it me? is it me?

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  • trinajean
    September 3, 2008
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    great take on the prompt.

    this piece flows quite nicely.


  • Xombii
    September 2, 2008

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    This is really good.
    The last two lines just pull it together perfectly, and really fit well with the prompt.

    Good luck!
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    Lish