I have visions of my little girl
Sitting by the window's glass, alas
I'm only dwelling on my distant past,
That girl took my child away, I think
Back, Lord it feels like yesterday,
Those eyes and that perfect smile,
This thought leaving trails like these,
One chance with her I whispered to the
Clouds, that opportunity
I would gladly seize.
Author notes
Option 2
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie Contest.. Interested? by AngelKat42.
980 points, ended September 6, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a great take on the promt full of strong vivid emotions of sadness from line one through to the last good luck in the contest
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this poem is amazing.. the emotions that I felt as I was reading this were of great sadness. the picture that you've painted with your words are haunting.
This poem touched me in more ways than you could have imagined.♥
excellent job with the prompt, and your poem is outstanding.
good luck in the contest
kat
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