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Time Senryu Chain

time has come to stop

complaining about all this ~

let our lives begin

 

life comes from nothing ~ 

a complete identity 

flittering in time 

time is yin and yang

the antitheses of life ~

fleeting existence

Author notes

Author's Notes:  My contest entry poem for contest:  Senryu string contest ... quickie... 20 POETS 

My poetic them is defining time in a Zen or Tao way!

A contest entry

What is time?

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  • echo-ink
    September 14, 2008

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    I liked them all,
    well, I loved them all, Yessa!

    Bell,

  • carole21
    September 10, 2008
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    . . congrats on the trophy


  • Manoj Sanyal
    September 7, 2008

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    Philosophical view regarding time and life.... well crafted.
    Thanks for your participation.
    Good luck.

  • carole21
    September 2, 2008

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    orginal write . . liked "life comes from nothing" and "time is yin and yang" . . good luck in the contest