the sun haloes, the sky,
circling above sea
in misty morn’
that shed from its rough
upon the land -
an escape
her beaches,
bruised, shaken
the shivers seek, calm -
a blessing
Author notes
Our beaches were battered by strong wind [120 km/hr] and sea over the weekend. All is calm this morning.
Pitcure: http://images.google.co.za/images?ndsp=20&um=1&hl=en&q=photo+of+haloed+sun+over+the+sea&start=40&sa=N
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Ah..you are capturing the depth of this great nature by your wonderful penning and trasfering the joy to the readers as well..I like this journey..well done...
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PrabhuDayal
thank you for stopping by. I wish you could have seen the photos of how the sea rushed our beaches. Frans
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Strong Imagery
Wow this is just increadible. I love your poetry for you have such a wide range of expressions. Oh how sad about the beaches being bruised and shaken but just as nature don't we both look for calm and blessings? You have me really thinking deeply on how to write poetry in a different perspective. I was just reading your whole homepage. Congradulations on your new book of poems as well as your other book. I will have to order one soon. Thank you for sharing your gift to write with me.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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Thanks Kelle Marie
You will not believe it. While part of our country was battered by stroms, another received snow, and another was locked into a spreding wild fire that did not of damage. Here at the coast we were battered, but we have 'lovely' photos of these 'smashing' waves. All is calm now - just the aftermath. Lovies to you. Frans
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Wonderful Imagery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good morning Frans. Your poem brings vivid imagery to the mind as we wait for the hurricane season here to be over. God churns the seas then calms the waters once again. I always enjoy your uplifting poetry. Take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Thanks Sandy
Nice to read your comment at the end of a work day. It's Friday and spent most of it in class!! Enjoy your weekend. Frans
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the image you embraced in this poem is very beautiful
that shed from its rough
upon the land
an escape
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Thank you
for reading and commenting on my poem. This I appreciate very much. Frans
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