Summer shuffles by
now in its last golden days
leaves many crying
Children wave goodbye
mourn across America
waiting for their bus
September takes back
decides it will stick around
Indian giver
A contest entry
- Senryu string contest ... quickie... 20 POETS by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended September 10, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thanks for your participation.
Nice senryu with detailing.
Good luck,
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Very well done, a great look at many children and some adults feel at the time of seasonal change. It does seem to tease us a little.
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Very Fun Chain!
Well written -- appropriate subject -- good luck in contest!
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i love this.
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