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romantic gesture

tonight my pen grew magnificent wings,
it flew me to the moon.
when I got there I wrote on the surface,
"for the record i caught the moon, now what?"
then i took a picture.

now that i've made it back to earth;
i'll mail you a copy.

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  • Bobby41
    June 29
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    This shows you have ambition. It's beautiful


  • Jayns Destroyed
    May 31

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    hahaha i positivly loved this poem.

    i hate poems that try sooooo very hard, you know? this is subtle and totally great. it should be on a tee shirt and mass marketed to the indie youth.