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my lips may validate, but my words will deny

 

Embracing things I'll never be,

she likes what she thinks is me.

 

Though I dream of that one fine day,

when dressed in white, I'll take her away.

But you are not that princess

and I have yet to become royalty.

 

Just lay your head upon my shoulder

and keep believing that I love you.

 

Honey, here's a hint:

 

I'm nothing but a fake.

 

 

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The title came to my head, so this is what came of it. You'll be the judge of how good it is or how bad it sucks.

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  • reckless abandon
    September 3, 2008

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    This doesn't suck at all. Its like a completely straight foward and true poem, I like it. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • penman gold member
    September 2, 2008
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    Excellent

    I didn't think this sucked at all. It was well done and very creative. Best of luck in the contest.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    Wonderful piece here honey
    enjoyed this actually.
    fav:
    Embracing things I'll never be,

    she likes what she thinks is me.

    I'm nothing but a fake.

    Indeed..this is awesome


    love ya
    passions