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Raw Emotion

People shrouded in disguise
Hate, seemingly untamed
Why cover your eyes?
Are you ashamed?
A dark cloud of lies
Constantly increasing
Circling the skies
Never ever ceasing
Without a purpose
Who would have thought
Rising to the surface
God could have wrought
A life so hopeless?

Author notes

This is what i feel the person hiding behind the heart is about. They're ashamed of themselves, but yet can't help but commit the evils the rest of world does as well.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    definitely as your title states filled with raw emotion, what a creative way to express the feeling of being trapped within a relationship.