Candlelight flickers
sparkling eyes ask a question-
Is the pizza here?
Stomach growling
patience is wearing thin-
the doorbell rings
Delivery man
money and goods are exchanged-
NO, not anchovy!
Author notes
Minimum no of senryu in string : THREE
A contest entry
- Senryu string contest ... quickie... 20 POETS by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended September 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hmmm..... no anchovy!!..
Thanks for your participation... good luck,
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This is good work. Very funny and light to read. Thanks for sharinf this commical piece. Something that can often happen actually. UNT
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Very Cute!
Good luck in this contest!
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lmao.....yes worth posting...and i can understand the devestation of anchovies...well done
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wonderfully done here.
Best of luck in the
contest
love you
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