Patchwork dreams
corners of my mind untucked
lying upon a body worn
reliving swatches of time
scraps of material
bits of remembered days
sewn in patterning collages
memorializing all that was
How does this poem make you feel? What was your general impression?
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Love the metaphor of the patchwork like quilt of all of life's experiences put into the blanket of life."swatches of time, patterning collages" A wonderful write! after my own heart...
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lovely imingery
like the words you painted with very soothing reality
thank you for this lovely piece, keep sharing
Linda
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I like your word choices and emotion here, and that first line patchwork dreams was interesting word choice. Great poem.
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AWE,
This was beautiful.
Reminded me of my granny so much.
God rest her soul.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful peice.
-Mandi
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On The Quilt
Thank you so much for reading and responding! Glad this poem took you back to a happy place!
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grandmother you never cease to amaze me I look at your work and aspire to be more like you
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ohhh,
This is a tapestry of fine poetry lass.
It had such fire place glow to it.
What was...
we shall cease writing to the past
when it finally passes.....right?
I totally enjoyed this piece.
Thank you so much for taking time from your life to read my work.
Help yourself to more.
My Irish grand ma used to tell me...
LOWELL!!!
Write something grand,
for you may
be entertaining Angels,
Unaware.
She was always right.
Blessings always gypsy,
LOWELL POE
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Precisely!
I too am celtic in lineage. Scottish in my fathers side of the clan McWilliams(MacOilliams)and Irish on my mothers side of the Riley clan! Kindred spirits? Your grandmother was right indeed!
This too has been my experience. I would be most honored if you would look at my poem entitled, "Entreaty to the Muses" and give me your honest opinion. Thanks for your indulgence! Best regards
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Love the imagery, metaphors...enjoy it all....What potential this holds...You have my mind for symbolism....and comparisons....This is just gorgeous..Short but full of images....Wow..Great!
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