Wonder why all seems lost
in a world meant of hope,
can't I have the way of life
though I'm regressing?
I'd like to love in faith,
have some happiness too.
But always feel dead
even when pleasured by you.
So sorry I'm sick
from this dread
you know how I love you
though inside I'm dead.
Author notes
just how I feel lately
In a list
A contest entry
- Without Rules by reckless abandon.
900 points, ended September 6, 2008, 113 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww... a sad tale of life.
I like the feeling in it. I can't say much more, truly touching. 10/10 good work
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I really enjoyed this poem.. short & powerful. I related to it instantly. That last stanza really hit home for me. Great write!
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This really says a lot in a small amount of words. The last two lines are amazing. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Yeap, shared by many people.
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oh thank you so much
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An enjoyable piece...
An enjoyable piece; you have certainly envisioned the struggle of life, which is shared by many people; nicely done. --Joe
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