With out him there is a
hole in my heart which
cannot be filled
Life is meaningless because
with out him there is no direction
and no one to lead me down lifes
paths
I have no comfort form my weary
soul with out him by my side
Iime has no meaning as I trod
through my day to day tasks
one lonely minute drags into
another with out him to bring
laughter and joy into my life
Though I am blessed with life
and time to enjoy it with out
him it means nothing.
Author notes
i hope this fits with in your criteria
A contest entry
- without HIM... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended September 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
im sorry this is more than 20 lines but once i get started i find it hard to stop and it wasnt complte with only 26 lines if you want to dq me for going over 20 i understand
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This is the voice of your heart..and the heart is truthful through the words raised here...thanks for sharing it...
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the authors notes are not current for some reason i cant get my last notes to erase sory
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