as these drugs begin to peak, the thoughts surround me
as i become full of grief and agony, i take another hit trying to relieve the pain
when the night sky is at its darkest, ill turn out the lights and see wat unfolds
as moments pass, another hit goes by, and the razorblade is back in my hands once again
with no light to see, i can see red illuminating on my arms
i wonder how long it will take, for these drugs to kill me off
as i make another bowl, i turn on the lights to see that im nothing less then a bloody mess
a tear falls mixing in with the red, as i reach under the bed
now in my hand i hold something that will end me quickly
i take it to my mouth, with the safe off and now im ready for a blood bath
i pull the trigger in the blink of an eye, and now im facing the gates of hell
A contest entry
- ~Do Still Not Know What Sin Is~ by SoulfulBubbles.
300 points, ended October 2, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Tabatha
Great my favorite part is the feelings and voice you can hear in it
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I found the final line the strongest in this well penned poem; You have expressed drug induced darkness good and strong
Please label this as 'Drugs' and 'Adult' so that the younger members of AP do not read it, I will come back to check
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