Plays again and again
I can't even hear
A word that I've said
'Play more of my music box
Lock my uselessness inside
Crush it with all the rocks
Just push the pieces aside'
Notes of such child's play
An endurable gasp of a neck wrung
Ring my ears to my brain
Still leaves sweet tastes on my tongue
It's that same loving melody
I heard one night fine
Now once more ironically
As with you it's my last time
'You brought the worst of it
All of you is your's to use
If it once was mine a bit
To love you I must refuse'
Choking to the same rhythm
As the caressed whispers before
I hear the music I seem to make
Again, but different
My eyes close, body feels no more
Author notes
Kia Tenshi-Don't Trust Me
eh...it has room for improvement.
A contest entry
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375 points, ended September 14, 2008, 12 entries
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I wanna hear what goes through your head
Comments
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A a a amazing!!! Its very beautiful!
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I am almost speechless I loved how you worded each part and how you ended it good luck in the contest
Makes me think of having a song stuck in your head hence the title that i cant seem to get out and it completely leaves me helpless but i may have perceived it wrong which i usually do =p
Favorite part
"Play more of my music box
Lock my uselessness inside
Crush it with all the rocks
Just push the pieces aside"
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