Let’s reproach all our goodbyes && enjoy every hello
Baby if you were h/e/a/v/e/n/ I’d reject your a.p.p.r.o.v.a.l.…
From all the places in the world I’d definitely chose Hell
Instead of your h*e*a*r*t*...
Let’s cut trough the mirror && reflect ourselves over glass;
When I say I’ll miss you, I’ll only miss your petty ranks
Because of all the pretty \c\r\a\c\k\s\ you have
None of them fill my cup of t.e.a.….
Anyways let’s cut to the point shall we?
[How is that even possible?]
We never get to make the figure
So how can we cut off the point?
My a/r/g/u/m/e/n/t/ is fading babe
&& methodology with you is endless...
It is useless to reclaim to Cupid another shot
When every time he shoots you have something to proclaim…
Let’s r.e.t.u.r.n. each phone call, maybe that way
The conversation will be banned from our minds…
You keep on typing, I’ll keep on responding
To all the anomalies you leave behind…
Let’s cut to the point, shall we?
Because the point will never cut through
After all the false /p/l/a/y/s/ you played
I’d still choose Hell over you
[&& carry a broken prideful ♥]
Author notes
Sarcasm - A keen, reproachful expression; a satirical remark uttered with some degree of scorn or contempt; a taunt; a gibe; a cutting jest.
I tried my hardest on this, hope I got to the point... XXVampireeyesXX
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A contest entry
- Irony, Satire, and Sarcasm (Quotes and a Picture Prompt) by Wandering Woodchuck.
666 points, ended September 5, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dirty Pretty Extravangaza! by Walking Oxymoron.
550 points, ended October 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Don't Mind Me [[I'm Only Dying]] --- Dirty Pretty Contest by EvenStarsBreak--x.
600 points, ended October 26, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
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Excellent write, truly wonderful and nicely written as well. =] Thank you for the entry and good luck.
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LOVING this!!!
The repitition of the title hit hard, was an incredible piece of work...
Can see why it won trophies! -
Amazingly sarcastic and painful. I really enjoy your punctuation and style. Great word usage and imagery! Good work, Dirty Pretty is really catching my interest
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this is amazing sweetie! I love it so so much, lovely take on the sarcasm prompt! i just adore this love
you rock huni
love you!!
kitty xx -
Nicely done. It is very biting and scornful. It would reduce a man to ruin. Thank you very much for your entry.
Mike
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